tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post819246375885545660..comments2022-09-12T17:50:14.776+02:00Comments on StoryTime: We Shall Be Together by Christopher MlalaziIvor W. Hartmannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04747901380659798898noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post-58205629966006583052010-12-11T17:27:42.629+02:002010-12-11T17:27:42.629+02:00excellent work,characters are real,plot unpredicta...excellent work,characters are real,plot unpredictable i loved itchris chakshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00613694834408493979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post-32653873978311157012010-06-04T01:51:03.009+02:002010-06-04T01:51:03.009+02:00I can't say I enjoyed this story, it was too f...I can't say I enjoyed this story, it was too fast a read. However, it's one that I will remember for a long time because of my appreciation for the writer's ability to squeeze such an intense and tragic plot into so short a piece; a masterly economy. Thus, it's my admiration for the story's brevity and the writer's evident skill I will walk away with from this affecting tale.Abdul Adannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post-19941353544750820762010-05-07T18:27:28.784+02:002010-05-07T18:27:28.784+02:00Thank you guys for these heart warming comments. ...Thank you guys for these heart warming comments. I am inspired. Jah blessChristopher Mlalazihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00159502134876926045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post-5570223640777623072010-05-07T10:55:41.178+02:002010-05-07T10:55:41.178+02:00Fully loaded from the beginning right up to the en...Fully loaded from the beginning right up to the end. I couldn't pause from the first word to the last...only catching my breath now. Very breath taking and impressive indeed...Keep it up ChrisUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02084741962498527724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post-52326940364844960372009-11-07T20:14:47.525+02:002009-11-07T20:14:47.525+02:00Gripping....the story is fast-paced and the reader...Gripping....the story is fast-paced and the reader hurtles through head-first..no time to catch their breathe and when it ends...it haunts the reader. One can not remain indifferent; so absorbing..so violent and spine-chilling...how do you pack such potent horror into so short a story using so simple a diction? Quite a read... woza lazo Chris from Emakhandeni!Project Edu-Connecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14331878934414317219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post-76577608387903958372009-08-28T17:41:54.782+02:002009-08-28T17:41:54.782+02:00Christopher,
I really enjoyed this piece, it is d...Christopher,<br /><br />I really enjoyed this piece, it is dramatic and the way the tension is heightened to the unbelievably horrible end. I wonder too, is Dlodlo affected at all later in life? And the extended family? How did they cope? Looking forward to reading more from you. And I am going to look for a copy of your book, a review of which I read on Novuyo's blog.<br /><br />Cheers.Hana Njau-Okolohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15978662559579409259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post-57303548182712276852009-08-20T16:31:20.527+02:002009-08-20T16:31:20.527+02:00Kept me on the edge of my seat, is this the climax...Kept me on the edge of my seat, is this the climax of the book. What made her to do this really springs to mind. I know the title gives the answer, but is this the full answer? She must have suffred from psychological problems surely. A gripping account Chris, well done!ksaskaksakskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06492382157913391150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post-80747218363621701782009-08-17T01:55:06.988+02:002009-08-17T01:55:06.988+02:00You demonstrated mastery of the suspense thriller....You demonstrated mastery of the suspense thriller. Now that the core character have died within a short time, it would be great to know the history of this story (in other words, what's in the memory of this story? Because I will be receiving my copy of Many Rivers soon, I am thinking of Mlalazi the novelist, in which case, I found my self reading this piece as a prologue to a longer story. Now that I am shocked, let the dust settle as I flip to chapter 1 of the novel, a thriller set in ...Nketa...Sizinda.Emmanuel Sigaukehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04171063918198721862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1187452933782537299.post-76306787018304437602009-08-16T10:38:18.708+02:002009-08-16T10:38:18.708+02:00This was chilling and nice, Christopher! The episo...This was chilling and nice, Christopher! The episodic approach to the story worked. The plot was gripping and I like the fact that your language was sparse with some foreshadowing in the begining.<br /><br />Really nice writing!Jude Dibianoreply@blogger.com